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Oct 12, 2005 12:56


The darkness envelopes

light strains, rages

in a dim, muted breath

of exhalation

Say goodbye, wisp of white

glowing, treading as it floats

Ah, the fruits of smoking pot.

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smallcrescendos October 13 2005, 00:45:30 UTC
the language is simple, but each word perfectly fits...and the whole product is astounding. translation: i loveeeeee it. it's delicious.

i read it and stopped breathing.

sort of.

and oh, it's enVELopes. hahahaha. :-p

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matt42386 October 17 2005, 03:00:35 UTC
that's beautiful, i am now convinced taking up smoking again will make me a better person.

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