One Direction fic, what?

[lissabear02]

title : Too Obvious To Preach It
pairing : Zayn/Liam
rating : PG
summary : This is why he’d picked Liam to have a sleep on to begin with; he’s the only one of them who’s any good at sitting still.
notes : This is the first fandom I've felt like writing for in years, so I asked aestivalblue for prompts to get me going. One was, something to do with the way

Comments

[oddishly]

Oh, this is lovely :)

[lissa_bear]

Thank you!

[snuffleslove]

thank GOD this wasn't as angsty as the last one. would have died.

love your niall btw. and obviously your zayn. :)

[lissa_bear]

Thanks you. And I'm actually a giant sucker for angst, but I usually like a happy ending.

[loupooh]

BRB. DEAD.

This is so so perfect, I love it so much, and gahhhh...

"Weren't you Liam?"

So presh. Also,

"Missed me, did you?"

was so perfectly Liam, I can't even say how much I love it. Stop being so amazing and writing such amazing things, or I will have to constantly stalk your journal. Seriously.

I especially love the ending and how they go from being so uncertain of each other, to admitting how they feel. It's just soooo good!

[lissa_bear]

Stalk away. Friend this journal if you feel like it. I don't post anything but fic here, so you wouldn't have to deal with my real life bullshit

[loupooh]

I love the long jumbly explanation of your journals. It makes me happy.
I feel so creepy, but I really want to friend your personal journal too. But to write like this, you also have to be an awesome person, and I want to be friends! I'm such a nerd, you can totally ignore me. I saw that you just posted a new fic, so I'm going to read that RIGHT NOW.

[lissa_bear]

Friending you now ♥

[vamphime]

aww omg this is perfect wow

[certainthings]

:happy giddy dorky snorty sigh:

Yesssssss! I loved the feeling of this story. And the way you portrayed them and the words you gave them. Ugh.

*five gold stars*