this was fantastic! absolutely loved the build of relationships between all three of them separately and together and LIAM was hilarious with his tallies! Loved the dialogue throughout too, just brilliant!
Oh, I'm so glad you liked this. Thank you so, so much! And the ending was written by my brilliant co-writer because I'm usually pretty much a failure at writing anything too explicit. I don't have the patience for it. Too many dicks, too much to describe.
I loved it... I absolutely adored it! There was so much to feel and I felt it all! The way they all dealt with everything was so wonderfully written! I loved how Harry and Zayn decided to turn to each other when the ones they wanted didn't want them... and the way Liam seemed a bit jealous for a second or so... just GAH! Perfection!!
no I can actually tell you that I legit started laughing when Zayn punched Louis in the face. It may have been hysteria. aw liam during this is killing me "who do you most want to shag" and the “All we’ve learned from this is that you secretly want to date me, too.” iesdlfngibhkrg;
there is no right choice deer gawd I give up on the english language and all possible coherency because "He’s not above begging" help no omg help
I had to stop copy-and-paste-ing because the dialogue kills me but all the dialogue kills me and it'd probably be a bit mental to copy and paste everything in this comment box, right??
aww omg nialler at the end just made this perfect because it's all so light and happy and lovely and hot and wow okay here have my heart I can't handle it anymore
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aw liam during this is killing me "who do you most want to shag" and the “All we’ve learned from this is that you secretly want to date me, too.” iesdlfngibhkrg;
there is no right choice deer gawd I give up on the english language and all possible coherency because "He’s not above begging" help no omg help
I had to stop copy-and-paste-ing because the dialogue kills me but all the dialogue kills me and it'd probably be a bit mental to copy and paste everything in this comment box, right??
aww omg nialler at the end just made this perfect because it's all so light and happy and lovely and hot and wow okay here have my heart I can't handle it anymore
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