Fic - Panic (Jon/Ryan, GSF)

[lissabear02]

Title: Remember A Time When My Balance Was Fine
Author: lissa_bear
Band/Pairing: Panic (Jon/Ryan, GSF), some TAI
Rating: PG13
Summary: He shows up for the show that night, plays through it with numb fingers, keeps his eyes squeezed shut when Brendon comes near his side of the stage, and stumbles off last when it's all over. Zack doesn't ask questions when

Comments

[torakowalski]

Oh, I really enjoyed this - great characterisations!

Tiny typo: "Jon pushes the covers down to his waist and blinks up at the sealing" - I think you meant "ceiling"?

[lissabear02]

Thank you. :)

Crap, thanks! Fixed.

[iamtheenemy]

I really enjoyed this story. I like it when one character holds out because they're confused or unsure. That really works for me, for whatever reason. I could definitely understand Jon's hesitation here.

[lissabear02]

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

I like it when one character holds out because they're confused or unsure.

Yeah, me too. Everything can't be simple all the time.

[skyfalling]

Is it too early for declarations of love? Because seriously, this is amazing. *flails hard* And I lovelovelove the bits with TAI. They're like a beacon of drunken, light-hearted snarkiness amidst a sea of angst, or something.

Wonderful job. ♥

[lissabear02]

*snuggles* Thank you, thank you, thank you! This is my first shot at bandslash, so I'm really glad it worked for you. ♥

[novalinedy]

I really liked this!!!

[lissa_bear]

Thank you!!!

[fiddleyoumust]

I am reading this again. I still ♥ it.

"Allright. So, we took a vote, Jon," Carden says again. "And the answer is no. We're not giving you your job back."

Allright = Alright

Also? You switched the Sprite in the first bit like I suggested and then in the next sentence Ryan has the Sprite again. Ryan is a theif who takes Spencer Smith's Sprite when he has a perfectly good Diet Coke of his own.

[lissabear02]

He wanted the damn Sprite, Julia! Why couldn't you just let him have it? He was all boo-face about it.

[fiddleyoumust]

I think what I love most about all that is that Ryan Ross, the skinniest mother fucker in the group is drinking the damn diet coke. DRINK SOME SUGAR RYAN ROSS. YOUR HIP BONES ARE GOING TO INJURE SOMEONE. AND WHILE YOU'RE AT IT, GIVE SOME OF THAT SHIT TO WILLIAM TOO.

[lissabear02]

Hah! Yes! iawtc ;p