The third story

[litaanderson]

This happens two days after "Monstes" and "Interlude."
Ariella's be hammered from the cradle with the idea that lust is bad (which is funny, considering her parents have thirteen kids), and conditioned in durty and doctrine. Add in to the mix a shitty week, and here's what you get.

Comments

[chloe_cappucino]

The first thing that struck after reading it was that it's sad. But there's more to it than that. I like the complicated-ness of the world and the church hierachy it adds depth. Anyway good job on writing. ^_^