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literrie

Dirty Little Secret

Jul 20, 2010 19:05

hyukhae (past!hyukmin), 2431 words
pg, angst/romance
Hyukjae tries to hide the truth about Sungmin from the law.

Sequel to A Little Voice Told Me!

( “I’m Inspector Donghae,” he says charmingly, all smiles and pointed teeth. Hyukjae is taken aback by his charisma, but stays resolute and calm because even though the inspector was being friendly, he knows that they all have only one motive in mind: to sniff out the truth. )

character: donghae, gen: angst, gen: romance, pairing: eunhyuk/donghae, character: eunhyuk

Comments 16

mikisj13 July 20 2010, 11:22:45 UTC

Love this~!!! Sweeeeeeet~~!!!!

literrie July 21 2010, 12:41:46 UTC

Thank you <3

tiromaru July 20 2010, 15:48:39 UTC

aww.. it really is a nice fic~
sweet~ how donghae closed the case just for hyukie~ and slight of hyukmin~
good work..^^ ♥

literrie July 21 2010, 12:42:21 UTC

awww, thank you ~
(:
thank you again <3

ddangkkoma July 20 2010, 15:51:19 UTC

well i'm glad to see a sequel of any sort being added to the au :3

it's good to see that hyuk has moved on but still accepts that sungmin did love him and never truly intended on hurting him :3 such a sweet story

literrie July 21 2010, 12:43:17 UTC

thank you for liking this <3
i hope hyuk is happy (:

dandanfung July 21 2010, 05:37:22 UTC

SPOT

dandanfung July 21 2010, 05:41:20 UTC

I really enjoyed the entire concept of the AU.

Not entirely pleased with the happy ending, >:|

But the way you weaved everything together, it worked beautifully, how both Donghae and Sungmin couldn't do the things they do best when it came to Hyuk.

You made the HaeHyuk so realistic, how Donghae was perceptive all along of Hyuk's reactions, how you gradually broke down the Hyukmin and slowly transfigured each block into HaeHyuk.

It's just, mildly sweet with a hint of bitterness? Does that make sense? Your writing makes me wibble. *runs off to stalk*

literrie July 21 2010, 12:44:59 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it (:

Aww, sorry bb, but I couldn't hurt poor Hyukkie again. ):

Thank you for making my writing sound actually good (: You don't want to stalk me! HAHAHA, but thank you dearie *huggles*

xiaoninger July 21 2010, 18:20:53 UTC

first i read the sungmin one and went 'BAWWWWW ;_____;'

and then i read this one and the sky got brighter ;) this was unbelievably cute and sweet. i love the idea of Inspector Donghae worming his way into people's hearts and the thought of the two bonding in the scary interrogation room, the AU in itself is super interesting/awww-inspiring.

and of course all of this would lead up to something beautiful! ah hae, hyuk, you two. case closed with a kiss ;) love it! /thumbs up

literrie July 22 2010, 13:51:22 UTC

AWWWWW ;________;

this was meant to be happier than the other, anyway! (; thank you <3 I think Inspector Donghae's pretty hot hahahaha and thank you (:

thanks for loving this <3