Reset - Chapter Four

[lithic_rune]

Title: Reset
Fandom: Jak and Daxter
Rating: PG13
Summary: Sometimes all it takes is an off-course machine to change the course of time. Jak never made it to the future of his birth. Instead Damas came to the past.
Spoilers: Jak 1, Jak 2, and Jak 3

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[ratzels]

I've here via TV Tropes, as this was a recommended J&D story. I've enjoyed (and am intrigued by) what I've read; are you likely to continue this?

[lithic_rune]

What? No, wait, what? This was recommended somewhere? I'm just completely mind-boggled by this! How did it end up getting recommended anywhere, let alone on TV Tropes? I haven't done any advertising for Reset or posted it anywhere except my journal. It's barely even started, not something I'd expect to get attention. [/stares] You're serious?

To answer your question, I don't know. Real life kind of crashed down on me and tossed me out of the frame of mind to write this. Sometimes I can get that frame of mind back, but other times not. That's why I've stopped posting things outside of my journal until after they are finished.

The best answer I can give you is that I haven't given up on it yet, but I don't know when I will update again. Still, I'm very glad you like it! Thanks for dropping me a note!

[ratzels]

S'truth! (I had previously read-and liked-A Matter of Time.) If you recognize the troper, feel free to chastize or thank them at your leisure.

I hope life comes together for you; best of luck! :)

[lithic_rune]

Oh, don't get me wrong. I'm incredibly flattered. It just took me by surprise.

Thank you again for your comments and support. I really appreciate both. <3

[sekiharatae]

I also found my way here from tvtropes. I'm sorry to see this hasn't had any movement in almost a year, as it's exactly what the fandom needs: it's well-written; a new, unexplored plotline; and an idea that players do (I think) wonder about. I mean, I wondered what happened to everyone in the past when the gate opened. I didn't consider Damas going back, but I did wonder about the other sages and such.

I hope you get to return to this in the future!

[countvampire]

Absolutely amazing; I sincerely hope there is plans to continue this.

[alanahikarichan]

Another TV Troper who followed the J&D recs page over here! <3

I know very well what it's like to run out of steam or time for a story, but it was still a pleasure to read what there was of this one, and to blaze through A Matter Of Time beforehand. You have a great sense of voice-- you know you're doing it right when the readers can hear the voiceactors reading the lines in their heads, hee-- and you have some super-fascinating ideas. I would read EVERYTHING you wrote about Damas and Jak and time travel for forever. C: In fact, I think I'm gonna go poke around your fanfic tag a little more now...

[nevar2547]

also from tv tropes, and i find this a certainly a gem! hope you're still writing, i'll keep my eye out. and judging by the other comments, i'm going to check out some of your other stuff too :)