"Lingering" [1/1]

[little_bibelot]

Title: Lingering [1/1]
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho
Genre: AU, angst/romance
Warnings: No happy ending?
Words: 3544
Summary: If he looks and feels the same, is he still the same? Maybe Jaejoong knew the answer all along.
A/N: Secret Santa fic for kioku_kagami at hug______.

Comments

[riiche]

"You can drink? I thought you were - " Before he could even finish that sentence, Yunho stopped.

This was the one that cracked my heart before I ended up a huge, broken mess with everything that followed. This... oh this. I want to cry, my heart hurt to read this. Then with "Who are you?" and I just... oh Yunho. The part with Changmin's gift and JaeJoong's desperation for normalcy, it was just awful to read but only because it felt so real.

Ah, just. So well written that it's painful! I loved it and hated it, but what a lovely concept to explore and Christmas only makes it all the more heartbreaking. Gorgeous work, thank you so much for sharing! Have a Merry Christmas, hun. <3

[little_bibelot]

Aaah, writing that made my heart go *crack* too :S I usually am not affected by my own writing but it stood out for me even as I thought of it and typed it out. I'm glad it had that kind of effect on you too~

Thank you so much for such kind words~ =) They make my (admittedly very boring) Christmas day~ I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it was painful to read. Merry Christmas to you too~ ♥♥

[heartoffire03]

you've broken my resolve.
I swore i won't cry again but this, THIS amazing piece, triggered the tears like a bomb.

oh god, I cried. still am actually.
I've never sobbed so hard over a oneshot before. my goodness.

merry christmas though ♥

[little_bibelot]

O.O;; *hugs super duper hard* I'm sorry~ But it makes me happy too, that the fic was able to incite such a reaction from you. ♥ Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment~ So much appreciated!

Merry Christmas to you too =)

[honeyflavor]

So beautifully written <3
Merry Christmas.

[little_bibelot]

Thank you ♥♥♥
Merry Christmas to you too!

[flame_angel88]

My heart has shattered into a million pieces. Every single event in the story illustrates the contrast between Jaejoong's desire for normalcy and Yunho's inability to recover. And the past anecdotes ;__; No drama in this short story but you got me sobbing hard. Merry Christmas! :(

[little_bibelot]

*glues your heart back together* ;-;
I can't but feel proud that I made you cry though~ On Christmas day, no less...*flails*

Merry Christmasss~~ *turns your :( into a :)*

[mumbles]

I was already thinking Yunho might be sick when I was reading through this story.
But then towards the ending it seem as though Yunho really has no hope to recover. I love how the title fits your plot. Well written and going to keep it in my memories. :)
Merry Christmas BB! ♥♥
btw what should I call you? Calling you bb might aggravate you. >__<

[little_bibelot]

My intention was to fool the reader into thinking Yunho was cheating or something, until the "Who are you?" line popped up and sort of slapped them across the face w/ it XD; And it was only supposed to be a drabble, but it grew and grew...
Thank you ^_^ For mem-ing and for reading and for being such a great reader for as long as I've been writing ♥♥
Merry Christmas to you too!!!
LOL bb is fine XD It won't aggravate me, don't worry!font>