Fic: Just last the years [Inception, PG-13, Mal/Cobb, Ariadne/Arthur]

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Title: just last the years
Rating: pg-13
Summary: So this is a missing scenes fic for the scenario where Cobb is dreaming the whole film. ‘A favour’, Arthur writes without breaking her concentration by speaking, the first entry on the column marked ‘LIST.’ Eames holds his hand out for the pen and writes below it, ‘a big one.’
Words: 4500 approx.

Comments

[angela_n_hunt]

Wow. This was brilliant. Thank you.

[little_giddy]

Thanks for reading!

[istandcorrectd]

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it. You captured the characters so well and maintained the complexity of the timeline in a way I could follow yet appreciate.

[little_giddy]

Thank you so much! (I love your icon, btw.)

[angleico315678]

This is so true to the storyline. It's so realistic in fact that I could imagine them doing something like that. The details are gorgeous and precise. Well done indeed.

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Thank you!

[metonymy]

Oh. Oh, this is amazing. The details - the rush of creation, the strain of holding it all in her head, the way this Ariadne is just a little older and more sure of herself but still learning - the interactions. The slight changes from the film. It's beautiful and heartrending. I love it.

[little_giddy]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[little_giddy]

Wow, thank you so much - it's always amazing when people tell you which bits resonated with them specifically, especially because it's the bits you least expect.