Requiem: [Ava] A game of you.

[little_gray_fox]

“Tell me, Evangeline, as a survivor, is this how you intend to spend your eternity?”

Pause.

“--kneeling before your betters?”

Gadriel’s voice is quiet and matter of fact. Always. Instructive, with trace amounts of curiosity. She did not expect him to use the Lord’s voice on her, the shock of it so clearly emphasized by the patient tone. Her teeth

Comments

Property Rights

[sunda_rakshasa]

He really shouldn't mar Sunda's property like that ...

S.

Re: Property Rights

[little_gray_fox]

(Chuckles) She could say the same thing bout Jamari?

Didja like it?

[karikinetic]

Awesome. Vivid descriptions, and a powerful ending. <3

[little_gray_fox]

<3

[sexycultist]

Excessively awesome! Violent-altercation-type-things, I think, are often way hard to describe in an excellent way - and you did it expertly! A pleasure to read. <3!

[little_gray_fox]

Yay! I am glad you enjoyed - it was a fun scene :) But you (pokes-pokes) haven't posted in an age yerself :P

[houseofwings]

Oooh; I like. You use the space really well; making paragraph breaks and line breaks that help the pacing visually as well as narratively. Woo!

[little_gray_fox]

(bounces) Yayness! Glad you liked.