Henchman

[little_grey_owl]

Written for brigits_flame , October 2010, week 2
Prompt: Henchman
Words: 50
Warnings:  violence

Comments

[oryginal_skin]

This is a good example of line format-- hard-hitting, solid, and with an intense beat.

I'd challenge you to try to add some stanza form to this. I think breaking it up into pieces would bring organization for the reader, and help with the overall feel of this.