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"Hiis few friends at the Blue Boar..." Whoops! Two i's in "his"!
And that's all I saw! Wow, what a fun story! So many times I have wished for a little muse to sit on my shoulder, someone to bounce my ideas off of and who could provide me with inspiration!
Please tell me you're not going to leave us hanging! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Oh, and by a completely random happenstance, I am also your ROAR guy for the week!
I very much enjoyed this piece! Your setting's time period is so interest to me; Victorian-era England (at least I think it's England; maybe Austria?) holds such an air of pomp and frivolity as well as hardships and turmoil. You capture these so well in your descriptions of the world.
I also relate so much to Pavron! Well, except that no one has ever paid me big money to write for them. But if someone did, I'm sure I'd have such a case of 'performance anxiety'! And though we just met Neria, I already adore her. I can't wait to learn more about her insecurities and strengths, as well as seeing how she and Pavron grow together as characters!
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"Hiis few friends at the Blue Boar..." Whoops! Two i's in "his"!
And that's all I saw! Wow, what a fun story! So many times I have wished for a little muse to sit on my shoulder, someone to bounce my ideas off of and who could provide me with inspiration!
Please tell me you're not going to leave us hanging! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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I very much enjoyed this piece! Your setting's time period is so interest to me; Victorian-era England (at least I think it's England; maybe Austria?) holds such an air of pomp and frivolity as well as hardships and turmoil. You capture these so well in your descriptions of the world.
I also relate so much to Pavron! Well, except that no one has ever paid me big money to write for them. But if someone did, I'm sure I'd have such a case of 'performance anxiety'! And though we just met Neria, I already adore her. I can't wait to learn more about her insecurities and strengths, as well as seeing how she and Pavron grow together as characters!
Fun piece! :D
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