I'm sorry I'm only here when depressed or in need of a favor (TW: DEATH)

[little_missmimi]

But I'm taking a workshop in non-fiction prose writing class. We get critiqued on our pieces and have to just sit there without responding until everyone discusses your work, and then you can make comments. For my first piece, I wrote something that was very difficult for me, and I only just finished it tonight, thanks to alcohol. Would someone be

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[helenajust]

I would be happy to read it for you. Just let me know the scope of the critique you would like (i.e. just on use of English, or also on structure, pacing, etc.). I'm out for the next 5 hours but would be able to look at it then.

[little_missmimi]

Awesome! If you want to PM me your email when you get a chance so I can send it over there, that'd be great. I don't really think I have many use of English/spelling or grammar problems, so more on structure, pacing, flow, etc.

[awakenyourfaith]

If you'd like I can look at your piece for you :)

[little_missmimi]

Thank you! Do you want to PM me your email?

[awakenyourfaith]

I'd be happy to! :)