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little_one24

Evaluating my online journal

Oct 05, 2005 00:27

I have gone ahead and made most of my journal friends only now. I just wrote a new lengthy bio on my journal to provide insight about “me” and the purpose of my journal. My journal is written not unlike a novel. It is linear. It is about my current ongoing journey in the BDSM and kinky-sex filled world. It seems that if someone has missed one ( Read more... )

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Leaving a comment or two: you are alive! *smiles* swingfox October 5 2005, 10:24:31 UTC

(And I figured with an LJ cut, those who already have me on their lists won't be as irritated with me.) *smiles, hoping for forgiveness*

Now, of course I am highly irritated by your journal. Forgiveness?? Why would I forgive a highly irritant and annoying person?? *ROFL*! Okay, obviously I am joking. What I am trying to say is that this is your journal and noone else's. That means that you could do anything you feel is right in this journal. If others don't like that, there is always the 'remove from friend' button.

I’ve noticed lately that the comments on my work has been lagging, a disappointment of course, specifically when I spent a significant amount of time writing about a scene I had the pleasure of partaking in, and trying to describe exactly so that my readers can get a sense of not just what was happening, but how I was feeling and reacting as well.This is something that I would want to bring out to you in all honesty. It is very hard to read your journal. Not because of how you word your thoughts, but especially the ( ... )

Re: Leaving a comment or two: you are alive! *smiles* little_one24 October 5 2005, 19:03:11 UTC

That's a good point. I'm sure I knew that in my mind, my lengthy entries are affecting everyone's reading time and desire to read my stuff. It's not stuff that people can just browse, find a point, and then 'bam!' I'm already thinking about that, hopefully then planning to change my writing style to get to the point faster. Thank you.

However, the length of my "stories" won't change, most likely, because well, they are stories.

Re: Leaving a comment or two: you are alive! *smiles* voluptuairy June 1 2006, 02:18:31 UTC

I have been very interested in what you have to say here and based upon your comments elsewhere, it sounds like we are in a similar place. Even though I am somewhat quiet about what I am going through, I would be interested in reading about your journey.

Would you please add me as a friend?

slaveinchastity October 5 2005, 11:19:05 UTC

It is not pretentious to want feedback on your writing, I feel the same. Keep on blogging and I will kick up the comments.

little_one24 October 5 2005, 19:00:05 UTC

Hee, hee. Thanks. =)

fremenassasin October 5 2005, 11:51:24 UTC

Being that for the most part, I have not had the time nor resources to "scene", ?I have been reading your journal constantly for nothing but ideas and revelations of myself. Sadly, you probably know me better than some of my closest, just because of our correspondence. Most that know me know me as "that big guy" or at the rennaisance festival as either "Winter" or "that guy who put that big sword through that bitchy lady's car two years ago"

I have begun writing more, and I look forward to seeing some replies from you as well. Keep your chin up. If you write it, they will come.

little_one24 October 6 2005, 03:07:27 UTC

Hee, hee. Thanks. I will comment on your stuff, and get an email of some sort out to you.

fremenassasin October 6 2005, 11:31:27 UTC

yeah i know that last one i sent you wasnt much... ive been feeling ill lately

rapidcycler October 5 2005, 15:29:28 UTC

I have to agree with the first commenter. But not so much that your entries are long, but that you digress from your point and wander within their length and verbosity. That makes your point hard to identify and to comment upon ( ... )

Here's your cookie!! swingfox October 5 2005, 16:43:58 UTC

Woaaa!! Well said! You actually put my thoughts in words a bit better than I did. Not surprisingly, simply because English is not my native language.

Well done :)

little_one24 October 5 2005, 19:11:24 UTC

Hm. . .It seems to be difficult to be structured and disciplined in certain topics. Like when I wrote about 'Punishments' or 'Equality' there was SO much in those topics, and then so many little sublets that were intertwined, that I did try to break them off into sections. But I guess I need to try harder, especially because my entries are really long, and people want to browse LJ, not read a novel ( ... )

rapidcycler October 5 2005, 20:41:01 UTC

cool. I'm glad you took this comment in the spirit that it was meant. Still waiting to introduce you to "sensual slapping"...BAhahahaha.

jadeddreamz October 5 2005, 19:47:52 UTC

I will attempt to comment on your posts, however, only because of real life time restraints and the fact your posts are fairly lengthy, my comments might be lagged to a certain extent. I still need to page backwards and read up on what i have missed from before I started reading your journal.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. your journey is most interesting and educating, at least to me.

little_one24 October 6 2005, 03:06:38 UTC

*smiles* I assure you there is really no pressure. I'm not sure anymore what I was doing when I wrote that 'section' other than trying to grab people's attention. It worked, some good, and some bad. But it is nice to get confirmation that people are reading.

I'm glad you like my stuff. I think I still need to go through a few of your back entries too.