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[little_sir]

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Crazy Jane's Gone Back To The MountainShe was nervous when she met me, when she approached me

Comments

[spray_of_petals]

I like it but purely on a constructive critism note I think that the word 'kiss' is used too often too closely together.

It's always good to read your writing. I like that I have an aquantance with so much talent. Perhaps one day, when you are published, I will be able to say "I know him."

[little_sir]

Heheh. I don't really care for fame (I'm lieing, of course, but it sounds good.)

[scarecrowfrk]

ah well ya fuck... shoulda woulda coulda... life goes on and its time for the next mistake... ain't life grand ya fuck...

[little_sir]

you lewd crude rude bag of pre-chewd food dude!

[scarecrowfrk]

substitute math teacher

[little_sir]

prison barber