FF: An Easy Step to Silence

[little_zigzags]

Title: An Easy Step to Silence
Author: little zigzags
Rating: R
Pairing: J/D, very minor Josh/Amy, Donna/Cliff, and Donna/Jack
Disclaimer: No money from these beauties.
Spoilers: Through ‘2162 Votes’
Summary: It’s not quite comfort and it’s not quite possession, this thing between them.

Comments

[laurenba]

Oh, I loved this. Some of them, especially, feel so spot-on to me...
My favorite is the one where Josh is driving Donna crazy trying to take care of her after Gaza. I thoguht that I had reached the end when I read the line about his unguarded look. Then I saw this:
He’s looking at her with more tenderness than she knows what to do with. She wonders what it will be like to leave him.

Wow.

I also loved the scene where she wakes him up on the couch after the convention.

The only one I disagreed with was the one with Bram. I just don't see it. But, as my dad would say: that's what makes horse races.

I would be delighted to friend you, but currently my LJ is not really worth reading. I will try to do better.

[christinekh]

Oh, that was painful and harsh and sad, yet oh so beautiful and wonderful.

whoa

[anonymous]

Your talents go way beyond fluff--although please don't stop sharing that too. This piece was very well done with such interesting structure and lovely, spare style. Thanks for writing!

Amy

PS I'm so lame I don't even have an LJ so I can't "friend" you but be assured you have some lurking fans.

[anonymous]

You are really an amazing writer! You peel down to layers of the characters that had been only hinted at....never revealed. Please keep writing these stories.

[witchofthedogs]

Brilliant.