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FF: Hide and Seek

Oct 24, 2007 21:34

Title: Hide and Seek
Author: little-zigzags
Rating: PG13
Pairing: J/D
Spoilers: Takes place during Season 6 and 7 through The Debate.
Summary: He, of course, has been dreaming about her for years.

( he's never alone with her anymore )

Comments 6

partly_clouded October 25 2007, 02:57:24 UTC

Simply beautiful.

He stretches his legs out and she resists the urge to look at his feet. She doesn’t need his role in her current late night sleep-jaunts taking a fetishist turn.

Hmmmm. Donna may not need it, but my brain sure did go there :)

christinekh October 25 2007, 15:30:42 UTC

You've killed me. I am dead. This especially...

he’s in the room and all he can see is him on one side and her and Will on the other and really, he’d be a fool not to sleep with her.

Josh is a pro, Josh has been playing the fool for years.

Wibble. Brilliant and beautiful and... everything I could have wanted. Thank you so much for sharing this.

sillyg October 25 2007, 21:53:04 UTC

It’s a practice started by the very core of the Bartlet team: her, Toby, Sam, CJ, Josh, even Margaret would take their late night reading out into the hallway and read under the bright lights to keep awake.

Something about this is so painfully beautiful. I want a whole fic around it it's so perfect.

And the paragraph it's in? It's beautiful and vibrant and painful and so them and I think you should write some more.

caz963 October 27 2007, 23:13:37 UTC

Really nice work - lovely attention to the little details.

And, heh, the obsession and unsatisfied lust.

Welcome to our world, Donna! *g*

Thank you anonymous November 3 2007, 02:40:01 UTC

Surely you must be a professional writer1 If so, please tell us where to buy your work. It is head-and-shoulders above the usual. No, that is an understatement!