FF: In This World (Part 2)

[little_zigzags]

Title: In This World (pt 2

Comments

[leli_5]

Love it. Just... yes. Perfect. You're ability to write makes me unable to comment intelligibly. Like my sad ability to string together words is to what you do as starfish is to soccer ball. And the fact that she was thinking about juvenile frogs for a minute there was perfect.

[little_zigzags]

Thank you so much. And shush about your own writing, I really like your stuff and am looking forward to (finally) getting around to reading it. Sorkin fest is owning my soul (as well as RL).

[sillyg]

This is really lovely. I am particularly fond of your characterizations of these characters. And! and, I love that you get across their passion with senses rather than something else. I like the soft quality of it. It's really gentle and so them. Nice work.

[little_zigzags]

Thank you so much! I really try to go for characterization, which was hard when they are having soupy moments and not working or running around, so that means a lot.

[jeanniebillroth]

This is really wonderful. One of the best stories I have read in a while. I especially liked that you took them out of D.C. What a change of scenery can do! All the conversations and the surroundings you described - I could really hear and see them. Extremely well done and very heart-warming. Thanks for sharing it!

[little_zigzags]

Thanks so much!

[original_jen]

I think you've just written my favourite fic. It feels so absolutely right somehow that they would get together this way, and the characterisations are absolutely spot on. Beautiful. Thanks :)

[little_zigzags]

Thank you! As I said above, I'm so happy when someone praises my characterization.

[lilachigh]

Lovely work. Thank you very much.

[little_zigzags]

Thank YOU for reading! (And commenting.) It makes my day!