FF: Let's Go

Sep 12, 2008 21:19

Title: Let’s Go
Author: little zigzags
Rating: R
Pairing: J/D
Spoilers: Goes AU during Disaster Relief
Disclaimer: No money from these beauties.
Summary: The point is, he thinks later, he should have heard her from the moment she walked the door. Or, what should have gone down at Morton’s.

she's way taller than him, in those high high heels )

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flippet September 13 2008, 14:32:42 UTC
YAAAAAAYYY, you're back! *hugs you* I swear, I thought about you last night, and how I thought you'd still had a couple of things on the back burner, and that I needed to poke you to see if they were still hanging around.

YAAAAAAAYYYY!!

Sigh. This was quite nice.

I tend to avoid Season 5 since there’s so much stigma around it, but I found myself re-watching this and thinking, wow, BW is pretty awesome, here.

That's what I think about S5 as well...yeah, it's got its problems, some of them quite large, but Bradley. Whitford. Knocks it out of the freaking park.

I really like the feel of this piece--the inevitability, and the *care* is just great.

Minor edit check--there's something wrong with this sentence: "if it weren’t the middle of the night in one a bus"

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newyork_noodles September 13 2008, 15:45:21 UTC
You're still here! Just like Josh!

Ahem.

LOVED this. So sad, so -whatsthatword- POIGNANT, and Josh so desperate and Donna so sphinx-like and cool and collected, pity-fuck and all, but she still loves him so much. The flashback to the Nebraska fields was so them, and, just. There's a poetry, a rhythem to your writing that's so freaking fabulous.

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kiss_me_cassie September 13 2008, 17:44:19 UTC
Oh, I've missed you and your writing. Lovely. Sigh.

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so_bambiesque September 13 2008, 19:13:46 UTC
I'm so glad you're back, I missed your fic!! This was as perfect as ever, so tender and GAH! I wish it had gone like this. Hope everything's good in rl as well :)

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ej87 September 13 2008, 21:46:22 UTC
this is wonderful . I love all your fics. Please write more !

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