Fic: Whitelaw Books, Chapter 3

[littleboycalico]

Title: Whitelaw Books, Chapter 3: I wish a falling star could fall forever
Word Count: 4346
Pairing: Pinto AU
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Birthdays, holidays, and meeting the parents.
Warnings: Fluff and romance. Deaf character. Unbeta'ed. 
Disclaimer: None of this is true.
A/N: The title is taken from Pink Martini’s “Let’s Never Stop Falling

Comments

[leandralocke]

Oh, how the hell did I miss chapter 3?
Well, now that you posted your master post you know what that means, right? ;) Live-commentary, lol

Here we go....

Oh so Chris has finally moved in with Zach? Yay :)

Oh oh, the papz. Yeah, this was gonna happen at some point. But glad to see it doesn't freak Chris out completely. Awww at them hooking fingers.

Oh yeah, I think I know why Chris is antsy... yep, guessed right ;) Hrrrr sextiteims.

tiny error: "Chris cupped Zach face and brought their noses together". Zach's.

Oooh that was a lovely scene, hot and sweet :)

“Well, I’m just happy that books and his writing aren’t the only things he lives for anymore,” she finished quietly.Awww bonding with the inlaws. I always like it when the family is included, and I can imagine the Pines to be such a warm and loving family. Sure they've gotta have some quirks as well but somehow I see them as quite the perfectly happy family

[littleboycalico]

OMG your live-commentary comments are just <3 <3 <3 and I always look forward to reading them because they're so detailed and amazing! Hehe, I just posted Chapter 3 - epilogue yesterday (well, the day before, but privately so I could continue editing) so you didn't miss anything

[leandralocke]

Well if you can forgive me that it's taking me a bit longer... but I want to take my time and read properly instead of just rushing through it

[littleboycalico]

Aww, bb, I don't mind when you read my fics, I'm happy that you them at all! I think it's so dedicated and sweet of you to take so much time to make such great comments for all the fics you read!

Yeah, I agree that there's something about Chris' family that seems so loving. I wonder sometimes if in RL Zach's parents and the rest of his family are particularly religious and maybe are influenced by that a lot. But even so, I like to think that views can change over time.

Heehee, I'm not sure what Chris and Zach's mom were writing about! I bet Zach is curious too. It'll be their secret! :D

Also, I'm looking forward to reading your K/S! I've seen it on my flist for a few days now and I keep telling myself that I have to get around to doing that! :D

[coeurdesoleil]

They are such adorable boyfriends in this chapter!! I loved that little moment when Zach hooked his finger around Chris' pinkie as they were walking down the street. <3 And yay for Chris moving in with Zach!

I loved Chris' family but I didn't really like Zach's cousins. Ugh they were all so rude and tactless! Loved how Chris charmed all of them and especially that he seems to get along so well with Mama Quinto. The way they kept passing that notebook back and forth was too cute! :D

[littleboycalico]

I also love that image of them walking down the street with their fingers hooked around each other!

Hmm, I like to think that, in the end, Zach's family falls in love with Chris, just like his mom did. How could you not? He's too adorable and they're too sweet together.

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! <3 Thanks for the comment!

[littleboycalico]

Yay! I'm so happy you're liking it!! :D

[the_deep_magic]

Zach tucked his arm under Chris’ head and lightly brushed his fingers through his soft hair, periodically moving his hand over to flip the page of the book he held in his other hand. Chris placed his hand gently along Zach’s collar and followed along in the book, feeling the vibrations in Zach’s chest and throat as he read aloud.

OOOOOOMG, I don't think I've ever read anything sweeter in all my life!

“Chris made a fort for the cat out of some boxes we emptied.”

...or did Chris make a fort for CHRIS out of the boxes? ;o)

With the notebook in his lap, Zach began writing down in detail all the things he wanted to do to Chris once they were back home.

Heh heh heh... AWESOME! Off to read the rest!

[littleboycalico]

...or did Chris make a fort for CHRIS out of the boxes? ;o)

omg, ok yes, this is what actually happened.

Yay, glad that you're enjoying it so far! :D

[inu_spockya]

dang, somehow I missed this before, so w00t! for master posts, yeah?

and now I know why people always have some weird-ass future date on them thangs, too, so, yeah!
*hurries off to read teh next part*

[littleboycalico]

Hehe, it took me a couple tried to figure out how the future dates work!