I'm pretty sure this fic just killed me. So, so beautifully written, some of the turns of phrases were so poetic - your Annie is perfect, not overdone like some fics, but having a feeling of being balances on a knife's edge all the time, an almost tangible tension... GAHH. Yes. Speechless.
It was your Finnick that really killed me though. I might just be biased because I fangirl for him so badly, but you've got his character down to a tee, the bright, radiant side of him, and the darker, more cycnical side - and of course, he's entranced by Annie even though he doesn't know it.
And the last line. Yes. It broke my heart and made me want to squee at the same time, which is pretty impressive. A brilliant fic, well done. <3
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I'm pretty sure this fic just killed me. So, so beautifully written, some of the turns of phrases were so poetic - your Annie is perfect, not overdone like some fics, but having a feeling of being balances on a knife's edge all the time, an almost tangible tension... GAHH. Yes. Speechless.
It was your Finnick that really killed me though. I might just be biased because I fangirl for him so badly, but you've got his character down to a tee, the bright, radiant side of him, and the darker, more cycnical side - and of course, he's entranced by Annie even though he doesn't know it.
And the last line. Yes. It broke my heart and made me want to squee at the same time, which is pretty impressive. A brilliant fic, well done. <3
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