This is a small piece of the script I'm writing. Feel free to comment

[littlegodpan]

This is a rough entry so disreguard format

Comments

[purfuknarmagedn]

I like heh. Sounds good ;-)

[nymphira]

Wow... you have me waiting for what happens next, I'm wondering so many things now, who was she? how did she die? what about the mortician? what is the rest of his life like? Is he a necrophiliac? elements of a good story...keep em' wanting to know more.

script

[littlegodpan]

I got you hooked

wow thats good

[mdghoulscout]

that was beautiful i loved it...i wanna hear more :( no fair