The last three wishes… (Part IV) p3

Jan 17, 2010 21:30


Tile: The last three wishes…

Author: Yay me!!

Genre: drama, romance, angst (okay, I’m cursing myself for attempting to do such a thing… T__T), …

Rating: NC-15 (my first time ever!)

Paring: Sakuraiba, Ohmiya…

Disclaimer: is it necessary to state that sentence every time? I don’t own them, okie?

Sumary: One day, when you open your eyes and you realize ( Read more... )

p:sakuraiba, nc-15, p:ohmiya, angst

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Comments 17

kantanaamaya January 17 2010, 20:08:10 UTC
Thank you for mentioning me in your Author's Note! ♥ Your NC-15 did turn out really well, so I wouldn't call it a fail~<3!

This part of this chapter got me crying again, haha. Especially when he asked Sho to name his first son Masaki, and then thought that was selfish of him, oh my gosh.

I'll be sad to see this story end, for multiple reasons, but the important one is because I love it. Can't wait for your next update, and thank you for keeping up the good writing! =]

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littlekid_lk January 18 2010, 12:41:32 UTC
Well, it's nothing, because, well,at that time you were the only one that agree with me T_T, I really appreciate that, it gave me courage to write that part...

Yeah... my eyes was tinging when I wrote that part, I don't know where the idea comes from, it's just bump up and I have got to write it down... and cry over it... T___T

yeah, I'll miss this fic too, the thought when I write it, the emotions and most of all, ... the acknowledgement that someone out there, in this whole wide world share the same interest with me is just soooooo....... *laugh*

I'll update soon!!!
see ya!!!
love ya!!

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saizasiren January 18 2010, 15:59:16 UTC
:D:D:D konbanwa :D:D do you have a nice evening XD XD coz I do XD XD maybe not that wonderful as you XD XD I love your [current mood] icon XD XD I can smile whenever I look at him XD XD XD thank you :]

So it turn out much better and shorter than I thought XD XD un~It's not like that I thought it would be awkward or something, and it's also not that I don't approve it [>.<] But anyway, good job :D:D I love you, your fluff is the best XD XD to me *grin* I'm shivering >.< *cold* [T.T]

read your received comment make me happy XD XD *don't know why* XD XD XD *laugh*

I need more angst to reduce this happy-for-no-reason mood XD XD unfortunately I can't find anything [T.T] [T.T] Am I turn to an emotionless person :(

you finally write NC-15 [T.T] you're not innocent anymore *cries*

love you :]:] keep it to the end nee :]:]

waiting ~ ♥♥

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littlekid_lk January 19 2010, 12:58:57 UTC
Yay!!! you comment!!!
I have been waiting for you!!!
Ehhhh???!?!?! what about my current mood icon? I think if fits my mood now, I'm supppper HYPER!!! ^^ lol
About the NC15 yeah, it's short but now, I think I have finally satisfied with it, though. ;)
this is not enough angst to you?!?!?! Well, think I should stop telling you my story planning before hand in class ="=! (It will do the trick then)

And plessssse, I'm still innocent :))

yeah, love ya, and see ya in the next chapter ^^!

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rizells January 22 2010, 11:15:19 UTC
First time ever im commenting a fic,your story is really really beautiful, i love how you describe how sho and aiba really love each other,and you just make me cry on a bus

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littlekid_lk January 22 2010, 13:27:30 UTC
*WOW* it's really my pleasure to know that it's your first time commenting on a fic, and that fic is mine!!! *wow*
and Thank you a lot for your compliment ^^!
And sorry for the tears T__T!
and Yes! in my fantasy world Sho and Aiba love each other, there is no doubt, so my job is pushing it a little further... ^^!!!
I'll work hard and update soon ^^!!
see ya!!

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itsumo_niji January 26 2010, 00:02:11 UTC
ooooohhh,pleaseeee...Q_Q do smth...
dont leave sho without his aiba...
it was beautiful...i really really love your fic...

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