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Mar 29, 2005 22:23

in the world outside
is it harvesting time?
the grass of my hut

haiku.

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_r_ March 30 2005, 05:26:52 UTC
Did you write that?
If not, who did?
It's very interesting,
I like it a lot.

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littlelittle March 31 2005, 00:55:56 UTC
BASHO
wrote it
in japanese. that's why the iamb's don't match in english.
it's supposed to be
5
7
5
as you know. and in japanese it is. <3elizzzzzzzzzzzabeth

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_r_ March 31 2005, 03:19:20 UTC
haha yeah I love haikus. it's so hard to write good ones though. :-D

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oohh nwsmith1004 March 31 2005, 02:40:59 UTC
WOW, My Chesnut. I love that. VERY profound.teehee and harvest is in the fall. but who cares

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