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littlemenomaru

Storm of Memories

Dec 03, 2011 05:03

Title: Storm of Memories
Pairing: Kyusung
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I'm from Ohio...not too many hot korean idols to own or make money of off. So do you think I'm doing that with these boys?...didn't think so
Summary: Memories of each other pour down like a raging storm.

A/N: Kyuhyun is in regular font, Yesung is bold, and memories are italics.

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( Storm of Memories )

character: kyuhyun, pairing: kyusung, character: yesung, rating: pg

Comments 20

phoenix_soar December 4 2011, 14:25:22 UTC

I like the format you used here, switching between both their POVs and going back and forth between the present and their memories. It took a moment, but it wasn't hard to get into it and I really enjoyed how you pulled the whole story together ^^

I also really loved the balance between the angst of the present day and the fluff of the memories. They kinda worked together, making it bittersweet. :)

Lol at Kyuhyun's cheesiness classic tendencies. That was an amusing quirk you added to him :D Made it all the more sweeter that the fic ended on a cheesy, classic moment too xD

I really liked this one. Hoping to see more from you in the future ^^

littlemenomaru December 4 2011, 18:53:37 UTC

Thank you ^^♥ I based a lot on the storm vcr, even the style of the constant switching though I made it a little easier I think. ^^"

I wasn't allowed to make it too angsty and I wanted the memories to be happy..you know them remembering all the good times and that makes them sad since those good times are not there anymore.

He's a snark, so of course he's not gonna be cheesy, it's all just classic. haha^^

Thank you^^♥ I'll try.

Cute~ iggysavannah December 17 2011, 04:07:03 UTC

I like it.

Re: Cute~ littlemenomaru December 17 2011, 04:12:01 UTC

Yay for short comment. but it's something

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littlemenomaru February 29 2012, 23:41:23 UTC

Have you seen teh storm vcr from SS4? That's where the style came from and well the scenery. haha. And well I just wrote it how it was in my head.
I can't leave it sad and well I had to keep with the way the memories were. haha

^^♥

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littlemenomaru March 2 2012, 23:55:32 UTC

I guess I've just accepted that they're not likely to be near enough to me to go so it doesn't matter. but the vcr is what this story was based on so a lot of it comes from that. and it is so much easier to invision the story if it you watch it.

charismavi September 17 2012, 08:27:49 UTC

Cheesy KyuSung is Cheesy I see :D