サあ, ひざまずき なさい! The Story of Evil

[littlemetaldrop]

Hella long story under the cut. Seeing the new Daughter of White, I decided to try to work out how they all the Story of Evil songs (including the fan ones about Miku, Kaito, and Meiko) go together. I expanded on a few details and motives, that sort of thing, and took into account some of mothy's comments from his blog which don't actually get said

Comments

[asakiyume]

I really, really enjoyed reading this. I knew some of the story from what you guys had said, but I like it told as one coherent overall narrative, and although some things are over the top, I actually found myself very moved by parts of it.

(Edited to add: And, I really liked the *way* you told it. I like your language a lot. I don't think it's trite; it feels right for the story.)

[littlemetaldrop]

:D I'm really glad it held together! A lot of the details/wording in the actual songs don't quite mesh up, and some of the story events are only vaguely described, so I'm glad I was able to put it together well! And yeah, some of the events are a bit over the top... I saw a comment very like yours on one of the videos for Servant of Evil, saying that normally they found stuff this dramatic really silly but they were moved by it anyway. I guess something about the story makes people like it in spite of that, and that's how it got to be such a huge success!

[amanen]

I like the way you tied it all together! I would probably do a few things differently if I were to interpret the story myself, but I like how you decided on peoples' motives and such. Where did you find the comments of Mothy's blog?

[littlemetaldrop]

They were on the Vocaloid wiki page for Rin/Len