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That Night (For All Time fic)

Mar 01, 2010 16:21

That Night
by: Littlepink80

rating: you really don't even need sunscreen.
dislaimer: again, poor. again, not mine. again, please don't sue me.

NOTES: A sequel. A companion, I suppose to Right After. Picks up.... that night. I know, not so clever with the titles, I am?

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fanfiction, for all time

Comments 10

angeltrisha9 March 2 2010, 16:40:29 UTC

So, yeah, what is Charlie gonna say? :) Didn't expect it to be starting with Mrs. Clark, but that was a cool surprise. Love the depth of her close panic and everything. And also, the way she thinks, I half expect her to attack Charles with her purse to get the truth out of him :) Awesome.

expressio_unius March 3 2010, 02:00:14 UTC

I love how you wrote Mrs. Clark. I hope we get to read more!

lunalove24 March 5 2010, 12:47:45 UTC

Wow, now from Mrs. Clark's point of view! You're really mixing it up! And I'm loving it!

And Laura's thoughts in the end has my heart in a flutter and my stomach doing the conga!

Rushing off to read the next bit!