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[littleredalina]

She bled every day. Soaking everything around her in memories of blissful love and ignorant thoughts. She couldnt let him go. Years had passed, and he was still the only thing she dreamed of at night. He was her heroin, her addiction, the rescuer, and the one thing that brought her pain. Her first love, the keeper of her heart. She longed to grab

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[anonymous]

heroin=girl hero

[littleredalina]

i dont care, it was a double meaning.. like my drug and my hero... why anonymous.. i can take correction/critique

[xbleedxbluex]

heroine=girl hero retard.

annonymous posters should die.

[littleredalina]

YES thank you harri...... i was thinking "maybe i mis-spelled it.... and put an e" but that was not the case either. Way to ruin a hard piece to write "anonymous"

[hereiamyoucome]

did I ever tell you how much I love to read what you write? You are gifted. gifted! I'm reading this and I'm thinking about how I've felt this group of emotions exactly, but had I written it down it would have come out so much less clear. I know you're graduating soon (if not already) and I really hope that you are considering career paths that include this talent of yours because the world would be missing out otherwise. You could, like, do missions in Africa and then paint all of us beautiful word pictures about your adventures there and how God worked. It would be awesome...or you know, you could do other stuff involving writing, I just mentioned Africa cause I know you have a heart for that continent. Anyway, I'm rambling.

[littleredalina]

Why thank you for that comment cherie.. ive always wanted to write a book, so perhaps, with your idea i will compose some symbolic writings(like this one) while i am in Africa. I leave in March and i will be gone until August. You can be in the credits of the book. cool.....