*sob*It was very moving ;_; even though the story of the guy who has cancer and suffers in silence has been already made a lot of times,your version is very original !I love the idea of the ten days :D at first I like "no !!!" lol cause the though of Jiyong cheating on Seungri really horrify me XD
I really love your writing style,but sometimes I was surprised by the reactions of the characters like at first when they're eating and Jiyong continue to eat even after annoucing the divorce.I felt like it was not a realistic reaction cause after that ,anyone would lost appetit.But I guess that's just my personality XD Jiyong was such an ass T_T How could he ignore such a wonderful panda ?!
Anyway I really loved your fic :D I hope you write again a long fic like that soon :3
Yea, I understand that the reactions were..off x) You see, I was portraying Jiyong as an ass, so him eating is like it was nothing. He had a good day with Bell and he didn't want it ruined..or was he trying to hide his guilt by eating the meal Ri made for him? hm~ lol your really observant, I had forgotten about that part. Thank you for reading !!
i've read this version so many times. and ur version still makes me wanna cry. ri love is real for ji but ji's been too blind to see it. this teach us to treasure our precious one. i'm still speechless over this. thank you very much!
Damnit Jiyong why!? I swear stupid is your middle name DX *sigh* damn my SAW geart for making me adore this so much. Btw is this based off of another story? Because it sounds exactly like this story I posted on my COMM about marriage and divorce. I'm not trying to say you plagiarized I'm just y'know asking? eheh....
I have no idea..? My friend from school actually helped me on this story. I don't know if it is. But most of the ideas are from her and I just added in many of the parts. Sorry if it brings trouble&Thanks for reading.(:
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I'M SECURING MY PLACE!
*runs off to read*
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and then realised...it does indeed go onto dude_wassup's profile page! how odd! *blinks*
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That's odd, um let me fix it T___T
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I really love your writing style,but sometimes I was surprised by the reactions of the characters like at first when they're eating and Jiyong continue to eat even after annoucing the divorce.I felt like it was not a realistic reaction cause after that ,anyone would lost appetit.But I guess that's just my personality XD Jiyong was such an ass T_T How could he ignore such a wonderful panda ?!
Anyway I really loved your fic :D I hope you write again a long fic like that soon :3
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You see, I was portraying Jiyong as an ass, so him eating is like it was nothing. He had a good day with Bell and he didn't want it ruined..or was he trying to hide his guilt by eating the meal Ri made for him?
hm~ lol
your really observant, I had forgotten about that part.
Thank you for reading !!
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and ur version still makes me wanna cry.
ri love is real for ji
but ji's been too blind to see it.
this teach us to treasure our precious one.
i'm still speechless over this.
thank you very much!
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My friend from school actually helped me on this story. I don't know if it is. But most of the ideas are from her and I just added in many of the parts.
Sorry if it brings trouble&Thanks for reading.(:
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although it made me really sad.. i really liked this. look forward to more of your fics!! *goes back to sobbing in the corner*
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