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minx999 April 6 2008, 00:34:23 UTC
OMFG! Yes! Finally! They actually were in my neck of the woods for once - yay! Love you, Shea! :D

became intimate with the thrill of sitting down and being lectured after having been violently beaten over the bare crack of his ass

Okay, that? That right there? The way you worded it? That *really* gave me happy quivers in my tummy. No lie.

And the way John finds Dean every time and rescues him and then beats his little ass raw. And you know Dean's getting off on it and is so needing his "daddy". Just makes me so, so indescribably happy.

I like the way John described to Dean about the meth lab and what could have happened to Dean and what he'd done to the drug dudes instead. I like how he's trying to show Dean that it's not a game - it's a serious, scary business, and he's not wanting Dean to get hurt.

I get so excited whenever you post for this series. It's like my little alternate universe that I love so much. Just awesome!

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littlestarling April 6 2008, 15:44:10 UTC
Okay first off, that line "...became intimate with the thrill of sitting down and being lectured after having been violently beaten over the bare crack of his ass..." has been rolling around in my fics for the last two months and I've been cutting it because it seemed awkward*gee* and so I finally just decided to write a fic based around that sentence.

I wish I could take normal prompts.

2nd-ly! LOL! Of course John has to rescue Dean every time! He's DADDY WINCHESTER! The most dangerous, ass- kicking, dirtiest, meanest, smartest, most grizzled, heavy handed, deep-voiced, HUNTER in the whole world! And Dean has him wrapped around his cock! Seriously "LMAO* *sometimes you feel like a nut!* (I've had way to much Chai today. :-P

Thank you for your lovely feedback! I appreciate it very much!

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littlestarling April 6 2008, 19:41:52 UTC
Awesome! Thank you!

I'm glad the timeline jumping isn't too confusing. Different parts of the story keep jumping to the front in my head! I just really love the intimacy of the one-on-one.

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kara_winchester April 6 2008, 01:27:38 UTC
I loved how you reused the Batman line! And love love LOVE the image of Dean being bent over the bed for John's belt after every single hunt! I'm so excited you updated, you're amazing :)

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littlestarling April 6 2008, 19:47:15 UTC
That Batman line will not die! Muhahaha!!! It's everywhere and I love it! Dean is funny! I love him!!! ❥❥❥

Thank YOU! "LOVE the image of Dean being bent over the bed for John's belt after every single hunt!" NO joke! Me too! Mr. Winchester will see you after class, Dean! *Hee-hee*

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kara_winchester April 6 2008, 20:21:04 UTC
I wish Mr. Winchester would see me after class!

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fpvs April 6 2008, 01:35:59 UTC
There's just something about John on a bed, fully clothed, while Dean is naked, eating... Or, well, whatever. Just being naked... I love it... That power John holds over Dean. Makes me think of a Lion with its cubs - the babies can scamper all over, thinking they can do what they want, but all the Lion has to do with pick 'em up by the scruff of the neck and the cub is helpless.

Yes, I think I love how naive Dean seems around John. He gets that there is always payment (in the form of sex or money) for what he needs, but he just cannot get that there can be bad repercussions for things. No, John has to beat that into him :) Oh! And John needs to spend a good period of time, sometime, licking the welts on the boys' arses when he goes too far...

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littlestarling April 6 2008, 19:58:06 UTC
"Something about John on a bed, fully clothed, while Dean is naked, eating."

Thank you for pointing out that dirty part! I'm quite proud of that! LMAO! I can just see him, naked dirty boy wiping his fingers on the sheets! *gee* (Reminds me of a boyfriend! That pig!)

Yeah, Dean has a one track mind. He can only see his goal and he doesn't care what he has to risk to get there. He sees no possibility of failure. He needs something hard and rough. He picks John. Fuck, I think he got exactly what he was asking for. ;-)

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fpvs April 7 2008, 13:51:35 UTC
MMM... Dean is so confident in his attractiveness. In his addictiveness... To let John come after him time and time again... :D

And yes... That scene... With John clothed and Dean naked and dirty (with food... come... it doesn't matter, does it?!)... It sticks in the mind :D

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jasmasson April 6 2008, 12:26:39 UTC
Ah, love it.

Also, GREAT picture! Did you make it? It's wonderful.

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littlestarling April 6 2008, 20:01:59 UTC
Thank you so much and yes I did. I have some minor graphics education! ❥

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