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minx999 October 4 2007, 06:30:05 UTC
Oh,this is goood! Gruff, stern John promising to teach Dean and also beat his ass? *flails* Were you peeking at my dreams?

I like Dean's cockiness here - very sexy...and hot...did I say hot already?

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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littlestarling October 4 2007, 11:21:58 UTC
LOL! Thanks I'm glad you're liking it so far!

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livsnddark October 4 2007, 08:02:43 UTC
Ok, Fuck I'm hooked!

I haven't hear this story a number of times.

*intrigued*
*& sloppy kisses =)*

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livsnddark October 4 2007, 08:08:20 UTC
Um...'hear' was meant to be heard? And... If that came out like I have heard this story already -then I fucked up! I meant to say 'original' can't wait for more. :)

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littlestarling October 4 2007, 10:50:48 UTC
Thanks, I've been trying to write stuff I haven't read somewhere else already. *beams*

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shelgrainger2 October 4 2007, 13:10:48 UTC
I so hate people when then do that, get you so engrossed in their wonderful story, having you wondering constantly whether John is gonna take Dean to bed and teach him a thing or two - or vice versa - and then they give you a cliff hanger lol!! I so hate tht but will be tuning in again when more is posted.

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nova_berry October 4 2007, 13:27:34 UTC
only for YOU will I read john/dean! BUT YAY, I was so excited to see that you'd started posting this! I think this chapter was just enough to get us hooked -- nicely done!

:D

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littlestarling October 4 2007, 22:25:20 UTC
Thanks! Your opinion means a lot to me! I still fully intend on asking you for help if I flounder.

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junalele October 4 2007, 17:10:05 UTC
Oooh, what a great, great idea! And I really like how you take it. Staying true to the characters even though their fundamental relationship has shifted. Wonderful work. Will totally look out for that promised new chapter. :D

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littlestarling October 4 2007, 22:34:57 UTC
*beams* Thank you so much! I've always been intrigued with Dean's hedonistic, even amoral tendencies. I think JDM is HOT! Wanted to see how they'd play together if they weren't related so....

Thanks for reading and commenting! It's very encouraging!

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junalele October 4 2007, 22:48:59 UTC
Wanted to see how they'd play together if they weren't related so....
Definetely a great idea. Also helps with my slight squeamishness concerning incest. :D

Good to hear my comment was encouraging because I totally expect to be fed another chapter in a couple of days. ;P

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littlestarling October 4 2007, 23:00:03 UTC
The chemistry between JA, JP and JDM is just too hot to be ignored, and your comment was very encouraging! I'm writing the second chapter and intend to post it this weekend.

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