Kirk/Spock fic: "Should Have Been"

[liv1701]

Title: Should Have Been
Rating: PG
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Fandom: ST XI, with some flashback to TOS
Words: 1,289
Summary: Memories transferred by Spock Prime cause Kirk to grieve for a relationship he will never get to experience, but Kirk isn’t the only one who knows that things should have been different.

Feedback is very much appreciated!

Comments

[daphnie_1]

Oh well this is just lovely :3 And I absolutely adore the scene at the end. I think you capture Kirk's confusion and longing here perfectly.

Awesome fic :D

[liv1701]

Thank you! I'm getting back into fanfic after not writing any for over 5 years, and it's really nice to know that I wrote something enjoyable!

[xlcatloveress]

GUH! You have reduced me to a puddle of goo here. Absolutely lovely, and oh so sweet! I love how Spock didn't let Kirk be, despite the fact that by Jim basically tossing command at him and bolting, he had all but been ordered to stay away *chuckles* I really enjoyed reading this and hey, it helped me procrastinate in my spring cleaning in the best way possible :D Thanks for letting me have this little breather in a day of meh!

[liv1701]

Thank you so much! I'm glad the story improved your day. Your lovely comment definitely improved mine!

[liv1701]

Thank you!

[danahid]

Lovely and beautifully written.

[lilbatfacedgirl]

This brought a big, goofy grin to my face!