Poem: "The Needs of the Many" (ST:TWOK)

[liv1701]

I haven't seen a lot of fan poetry on LJ, so this is sort of an experiment. Let me know what you think!

The Needs of the ManyThe needs of the many

Comments

[eternityrose]

Th-that was so lovely ;__;
I'd love to see more of your poems!

[liv1701]

Thank you! I'll be posting more soon. :)

[eternityrose]

You're welcome!
And yay <3

[liv1701]

By the way, I adore your icon!

[alpha_hydra]

that was really good! I like you repeat the whole 'needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few'; it gives the meaning completely different perspectives. I need to go read the rest of your poetry now :)

[tracionn]

Oh dear...*weep*...this is...*snuffle*...so very lovely...*sob*

It really is. I especially love the last line, but then, I love all the others as well :)

And that's definitely a go for poetry on LJ's!!!

[xlcatloveress]

This is so touching and sweet - thank you so much for sharing it with us all! Definitely share more, please? :)

Edit: now with 100% more icon attached

[guerabella]

You're really good! This is very sweet. ^_^