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live_shop_die28

First Story! Chapter 1, all very exciting

Sep 02, 2011 02:41

Title:Key To the City- ch (1/?)
Author:Me
Rating: pg 15
Pairing: multiple
Summary: A mix of Disney's Robin Hood, dinner theater and College boy. nuff said.

“Who is ready for some good, clean wholesome fun?!”( Read more... )

Comments 1

artetseoul June 24 2012, 22:46:54 UTC

So, this story had me snickering like a mad person (because, you know, full-on laughter would wake up my roommate), but no seriously -- I really like it so far.

Your writing and characterizations are witty and not SO unbelievably canon that it feels like every other SHINee fic: in other words, you've managed in a short time to efficiently give each character their own specific voice without falling into fandom cliché. That's what keeps me hooked on fics more than anything else.

The only way I can describe your Kibum so far, apart from being intuitively spot-on, is clever. With word choice, etc.

I look forward to future installments and seeing where this story goes. I think you gave the right amount of story in the first chapter to not overwhelm the reader, yet pique the reader's interest and keep them coming back. ^^