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Just One Kiss to Feel The Spell ~ Chapter 3

Nov 24, 2010 21:12

Title: Just One Kiss to Feel The Spell ~ Chapter 3/10
Author: liveindesire
Pairing: Adam/Tommy
Word Count: ~ 3,988
Setting: AU - Vampire fic
Rating: NC-17
Beta: saar_fantasy Thank you so much honey. <3
I also want to thank adamluvr36-fic for helping me to become a better writer.
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything except the order of words. This never happened.
Warnings: m/m sex, angst, ( Read more... )

just one kiss to feel the spell, nc-17, tommy joe, adam

Comments 35

adommylove2010 November 25 2010, 16:04:43 UTC

this fic has me so drawn in..its like im watching it as it unfolds ..brilliant ..cant wait til the next update ...thank you for such a great thanksgiving morning read :o)

liveindesire November 25 2010, 16:50:10 UTC

Thank you darling. :) <333 I'm glad you're enjoying the story. <333

demolition_lexi November 27 2010, 16:32:51 UTC

I just discovered this fic and i have to say, it is fucking amazing!!

So well written, such a great storyline so far and I absolutely love both of them so far. God, you have such a beautiful rendition of vampire!Adam.

Can't wait to see what happens next! <3

liveindesire November 27 2010, 17:05:22 UTC

Thank you so much my dear! <333 I'm glad you're enjoying it. More is coming in a few days. :)

tommyglitter November 28 2010, 04:16:06 UTC

OMG, girl! This chapter was hawt! Please, please, please update this soon! This story is captavating!

I didn't realize you had this chapter posted yet. Are there any more that I might have missed?

liveindesire November 28 2010, 22:43:37 UTC

No, you haven't missed more. Chapter 4 will be up in a few days. And is seems it's going to be a looooong chapter. Thank you so much honey. <3333 *hugs*

fara1903 January 12 2011, 13:47:15 UTC

Wow! That was so intense! Hope Tommy is still alive!

liveindesire January 12 2011, 21:44:43 UTC

Yeah, I love to write intense things. :D Thank you, bb!

youkeyh February 5 2011, 19:59:38 UTC

I guess this is my favorite chapter so far. Not just because of the hot awesome sex part, but also all of it. Like how yo describe it all. Great...

liveindesire February 9 2011, 13:06:50 UTC

Thank you, I really appreciate your words. I love descriptive writing and I tend to use too many epithets. *hugs* <333

youkeyh February 9 2011, 21:59:02 UTC

Your welcome *hugs* <3
I think I do it too. When I try to write I think I over describe things too much sometimes...