Poem: The Glassworks

[ziarre]

Feedback welcome!

The GlassworksBecause bewildered we stood

Comments

[hundakleptisis]

Very nice, the imagery and sensations at the beggining of the poem were very powerful. The end felt weaker compared to this but it was still good.

S.J.

[jamcakes007]

i love this. i wanted to read it again because the way it sounds coming out of my mouth matches the imagery. and it tastes good going down.