I'm still in the moment of processing this poem in my head, but I wanted to share my gut reaction to it, which is good! I like the voice and atmosphere in the poem, the sense of conflict, and the powerful moment at the end. Well done.
(must note that I've been reading My Mistress' Sparrow is Dead, a book of short love stories, and your poem fits into the mindset this book's put me in.
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(must note that I've been reading My Mistress' Sparrow is Dead, a book of short love stories, and your poem fits into the mindset this book's put me in.
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