writing: at first - xabi alonso(/steven gerrard)

Apr 03, 2007 00:18

sort of but not really s/x. i will write them; someday.
- again; pointless random, crap. i don't know why i bother; feelings to words? i dunno.

fic: at first | xabi alonso(/steven gerrard) | pg | five times xabi felt awkward/out of place/like he didn't understand | 800 words

at first

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It was sunny and the sticky heat made his shirt cling to him ( Read more... )

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elynaz_sgxa April 3 2007, 00:47:42 UTC
I loved it. :)
Especially no 3 and 4. and really you should write them.

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liverlass April 4 2007, 09:27:43 UTC
hehe thanks!

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analysezceci April 3 2007, 00:53:43 UTC
(He truly promises himself he will do better next time when he sees a young boy crying outside the gates, eyes swollen, shirt stained and programme crumpled in his small hands.)

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It feels oddly like all those times he tried being goalie, how foreign and strange the gloves felt on his hands.

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Recognizes that it’s hard to fit into a place; you never belonged too in the first place.

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and Xabi can reassure himself he has one thing Danny Murphy might not ever have again; Steven’s future.

Though, not even Xabi himself can say he has that.)

You do break my heart, you know? Your Xabi is spot on, and just... it's flawless, really.♥

i will write them; someday.

I vow to torture you until you do.XD

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liverlass April 4 2007, 09:28:25 UTC
*snort* flawless my arse XD okay though :) thanks

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parallelkites April 3 2007, 04:08:40 UTC
You know you pwn my soul. This has just reinforced the fact. <3

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liverlass April 4 2007, 09:29:02 UTC
aw yeh. i enjoy soul pwning. <3 *squishes you*

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bolanboogie April 3 2007, 10:00:14 UTC
:D I love your stuff, seriously. So much thought it's just beautiful. The last one is so sad. He belongs here, most definitely *nods*. Can't wait to read any more you have tucked up inside you!

x

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liverlass April 4 2007, 09:31:31 UTC
aw thanks hun *squish*

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c0v89 April 3 2007, 23:52:31 UTC
I read this yesterday.
Forgot to comment because I'm lazy.
But. Love.
It's beautiful.
And Jasmine should shut up about not being able to write.
Yes.

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liverlass April 4 2007, 09:31:58 UTC
hehe thanks linado :)
still theenk it is shit though =D

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