WOW. Should not have read this at work. Phew. *mops brow*
And do you know what kills me? That this is so beautifully written and English isn't even your first language. My envy...feel it.
This is not love, you remind yourself; you don’t love him, he doesn’t love you, but you’ll be damned if your entire body doesn’t sing like it’s your wedding night.
Laura, you big liar!
That was hot and beautiful and a great use of 2nd person POV. Trouble is, now that you've written one completely awesome story, you're going to have to write many more! Or you'll be in big trouble.
LOL I so envy you for being able to read fics at work. ENVY YOU.
And also? THANK YOU. Granted I have a brilliant beta in Mary, but thank you so much for those words. ♥
And trust me, babe, I'll be trying! However, I started writing this back in September, so... I'm not really the fastest writer out there. LOL But there are plenty of things floating around in this brain of mine, I just need to get it all out. :)
I was interrupted while reading your fic. Epic fail, cause if there's something I really, really hate then it's being interrupted while reading fanfiction. *glares at boyfriend* So yeah, I was not your first commenter, sorry. :/ However, I'd like to stress that I was your first watcher. ;)
This is not love, you remind yourself; you don’t love him, he doesn’t love you, but you’ll be damned if your entire body doesn’t sing like it’s your wedding night. I can't say why, but that line somehow struck a cord in me, it's beautiful.
“Don’t give up on me,” you whisper, before you straighten up and leave. As is this. It's one of the most amazing final sentences I've ever read.
Angie, this entire fic is so wonderful. You really should write more often. What I love most about this is the interesting setting, it's very original. I don't think I've ever read a fic that dealt with the events of Colonial Day in this way, and how you framed those with the things in Fragged et al., great, simply great. ♥ And I am so trying to bribe, beg or just
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I can't say why, but that line somehow struck a cord in me, it's beautiful. I can't take full credit for it; everything up 'til 'it's your wedding night' is mine; those last four words came from a suggestion by my beta, and they just worked perfectly for what I was trying to say. :)
As is this. It's one of the most amazing final sentences I've ever read. Thank you so much, bb; it took me ages to figure out the perfect way to end the story, and then that came to mind. I'm so glad you like what I ended up with. ♥
LOL And you KNOW I'll try to write more! You also know what a slow writer I am. ;) But I will try! *smooches* SEE YOU DAY AFTER TOMORROW!! :D
Thank you so much, honey! ♥ And trust me, I'm trying! This one took me 5 months to finish, though. I'm not exactly the fastest writer in the world. LOL I'm hoping my writing will speed up soon, though. :D ♥ ♥ ♥
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WOW. Should not have read this at work. Phew. *mops brow*
And do you know what kills me? That this is so beautifully written and English isn't even your first language. My envy...feel it.
This is not love, you remind yourself; you don’t love him, he doesn’t love you, but you’ll be damned if your entire body doesn’t sing like it’s your wedding night.
Laura, you big liar!
That was hot and beautiful and a great use of 2nd person POV. Trouble is, now that you've written one completely awesome story, you're going to have to write many more! Or you'll be in big trouble.
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And also? THANK YOU. Granted I have a brilliant beta in Mary, but thank you so much for those words. ♥
And trust me, babe, I'll be trying! However, I started writing this back in September, so... I'm not really the fastest writer out there. LOL But there are plenty of things floating around in this brain of mine, I just need to get it all out. :)
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This is not love, you remind yourself; you don’t love him, he doesn’t love you, but you’ll be damned if your entire body doesn’t sing like it’s your wedding night.
I can't say why, but that line somehow struck a cord in me, it's beautiful.
“Don’t give up on me,” you whisper, before you straighten up and leave.
As is this. It's one of the most amazing final sentences I've ever read.
Angie, this entire fic is so wonderful. You really should write more often. What I love most about this is the interesting setting, it's very original. I don't think I've ever read a fic that dealt with the events of Colonial Day in this way, and how you framed those with the things in Fragged et al., great, simply great. ♥ And I am so trying to bribe, beg or just ( ... )
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I can't say why, but that line somehow struck a cord in me, it's beautiful.
I can't take full credit for it; everything up 'til 'it's your wedding night' is mine; those last four words came from a suggestion by my beta, and they just worked perfectly for what I was trying to say. :)
As is this. It's one of the most amazing final sentences I've ever read.
Thank you so much, bb; it took me ages to figure out the perfect way to end the story, and then that came to mind. I'm so glad you like what I ended up with. ♥
LOL And you KNOW I'll try to write more! You also know what a slow writer I am. ;) But I will try! *smooches* SEE YOU DAY AFTER TOMORROW!! :D
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THIS IS UTTERLY AMAZING. JOB WELL FRAKKING DONE FOR DAMN SURE. FOR DAAAAAAAAAAAMN SURE.
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