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[livindagclife]

Title: flowers
Author: forgotten evil
Rated: G
Characters: no names mentioned. But Billy and Joel intended (Billy=evil one)
Summary: VERY VERY short little fic.
disclaimer: own no-one and no-thing
My first post so please comment. I know it isn’t good or anything but I’m trying to sort myself out at the moment

Comments

[leecherous]

Well hello there. Very nice and descriptive for a short little fic, good spelling and punctuation which is always a plus. It carries a lot of emotion concisely, which I also like. Some people [self included] have the tendency to get way too wordy when things can be said in just a few lines. I like it.

I'm also posting because I just recieved the comment you left on the post I made in music_fic with my story A Bitch Is A Bitch. Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Unfortunately I can't think of any other BDSM-relationship fics I've read, at least not in the band slash genre. It is a fun idea to play with though, perhaps you should try it out. Thanks again.

- Nihilism

[livindagclife]

sorry its taken so long to reply.
maybe i might try to write one in the future when my confidence is better.
thank you for the review, its reassuring to know i conveyed what i was trying to.
thanks again