Dreaming

[lizkaras]

The following text is my creative response to a daydream I had recently; enjoy.

I’m having that dream again. The one where I’m hurtling out of a window of the thirty seventh floor and flinging myself clear of the building that was disintegrating around me only seconds before. I can hear the screams of the people being sucked in and down, forever

Comments

Great start!

[michaelgriffith]

Fabulous first entry Liz... you have a powerful descriptive style- a real ability to draw your reader into your imaginative world with your first sentence. Well done!
Michael
MG
Be sure to make me into one of your "friends"...

Re: Great start!

[lizkaras]

Thank you MG! That is wonderful feedback to receive in my first week; I can tell Literature is going to be a favourite subject for me!
Can't wait for next week's lecture, see you there!
Liz

[ashlee_stevens]

Wow what a beatiful piece of writing.
you have fabulous use of descriptive language, and the imagery created paints the perfect picture, with substantial detail, in my mind.

well written.
ash x

why thank you kindly

[lizkaras]

Hi Ash

Thank you very much for the lovely comment on my work: I am very much a descriptive writer so it's good to know that I come across as such.

Hope to see you in literature this week to say hi!

Have a lovely week
Liz x

[michaelgriffith]

Great to see you jumping in so quickly with positive, constructive response. Well done Ashlee.
MG