Comments | lizparker6: Dance to the Beat (Castle/Beckett one-shot)

lizparker6

Dance to the Beat (Castle/Beckett one-shot)

May 31, 2012 16:43

Name: Dance to the Beat
Author: lizparker6
Pairing: Castle/Beckett
Genre: het, romance, pwp
Rating: pg-13
Word count: approx. 2 800 words
Summary: His first steps upon returning from his 2 week tour lead directly to a dance club, because that's where she is supposed to have fun tonight with their friends. Her legs are bare and long, oh so long, the high heels she' ( Read more... )

fanfiction, castle/beckett, fic: castle, castle

Comments 19

txduck May 31 2012, 16:47:11 UTC

Loved it :)

lizparker6 May 31 2012, 16:51:32 UTC

Thank you!

lizparker6 May 31 2012, 17:51:29 UTC

Oh, and I nearly forgot. Such a suiting icon!!:)

txduck May 31 2012, 18:06:59 UTC

LOL... I thought it was suitable choice *g*

geekgrrllurking May 31 2012, 16:51:18 UTC

*Happy sigh*

Boy, I'd love to see this on the real show. Great fic, I think you may be the death of us all, leaving us with the image of Castle and Beckett grinding on a dance floor together. Loved it!

lizparker6 May 31 2012, 16:54:32 UTC

Lol, thank you. I know, that image? HOT. I cannot shake that memory od them together in that disco scene in season 3, I so wished we could see them together like that again. :) but, thats why we have fanfiction and our over-stimulated imaginations, dont we?;)

Thank you for your nice words on the fic.:)

a_loquita May 31 2012, 18:25:03 UTC

Very nice!

lizparker6 May 31 2012, 18:26:09 UTC

Thank you!

mac_beth13 May 31 2012, 20:32:16 UTC

"I want our dance to put those four to shame."

Loved that ending! Really liked this! Loved how he trusts her enough to watch the scene play out with the other guy. I can only imagine how hot that dance floor must have been with the three couples steaming it up out there. Nice job!

lizparker6 May 31 2012, 20:41:13 UTC

Well, I always considered Castle to be a very generous man, and that extends also to his relationship with kate. As long as she has his trust, she can practically do as she likes.:) But we know she would never breach that trust, so its a good deal. Also, as we know from the episodes, out of the two of them, Beckett is the more jealous one who directly voices her disatisfaction when there are other women circling around castle.:) So I wanted to play with the idea of him having fun watching her having fun. Lol, does that even make sense?:)

Anyway, thank you so much for your kind words! Glad you liked.:)

mac_beth13 May 31 2012, 20:43:12 UTC

Haha, yup, it made sense! And you are most welcome! :)

thefallingapple June 1 2012, 05:19:20 UTC

Very nice story! I love the image of Castle watching her, trusting her, being turned on by her. And her last line is perfect. :) Thank you for sharing this.

lizparker6 June 1 2012, 18:53:54 UTC

Thank you for your nice words. I really wanted to underline that trust part, because i think thats what castles part of the relationship is based on, implicit trust for kate. i think thats why he was so badly hurt upon finding out she's been lying to him im 47 seconds, because he felt so much betrayed and hurt by that breach of trust.
You are most welcome, I SO MUCH like to share, especially with such nice ppl as you are.:)