Dead to the World (6/X)

[lizparker6]

Name: Dead to the world
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[prdnanny]

amazing extraordinary job.....i love how jim is still taking care of his little girl.....absolutely love this story..

[lizparker6]

Ok, thank you. And yes, Jim is very protective, at least as much as Kate will let him.;) And right now, she doesnt have that much choice. But yes, he is wonderful and I love to have incorporated him in this story so much.

Thank you for your nice words!!

[bluewillowtree]

Oh, this chapter is just heartcrushing, but so, so good.

[lizparker6]

Thank you.;) I know, I am a baad person for putting them into so much pain, but I just couldnt help but explore the situation as much as possible, I mean, I would hate to jump the 8 months only to put them together and NOT tell what theyve been through. It wouldnt mean they didnt suffer either way.

Anyway, thank you for commneting!:)

[ninjamonkey73]

Gah! I'm all choked up here! Great story. I'm anxiously awaiting each new installment. :)

[lizparker6]

Thank you.:) And thank you.:) I am working on it, I promise.:) I try to update twice a week, which is, trust me, for me, extraordinary.:D I used to have update spans on weeks, months even!:) But thats not what I am trying to to with this story, so dont worry.:)

[kekekins]

This is absolutely heart breaking and your writing just propels the story into such a believeable place. My heart wrenches for both of them and I hope that the next season has as much heart as what is in your words. I am really loving this!

[lizparker6]

Oh thank you! Your words are really making my heart ship a beat. I am sure marlowe will continue to be his genius self and that the next season will be as heartfelt and sweet and funny as ever. Thats actually the reasons why I am not all that concerned about my story being so angsty, cause its ONLY pure fiction, right?;) They are indeed in a happy place right now I am SOOO thrilled for them. :)

[englishstrawbie]

Oh, poor Kate. I love the image you create at the end, of the way she clings to the book like it's her only link to her past life. Such a wonderful image. This is a heartbreaker.

[lizparker6]

Oh, thank you! I am glad the image worked for you the same way I planned on it to work.:))) And thank you for the nice words, lol, well, if you can call a 'heartbreaker' a compliment, really.;)

Anyway, thanks. Glad you are enjoying the story so far.:)