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[lizzrdking]

I've overplanned. I'm writing towards a goal. must do this and this, and use this to bring this out in this character, and so on

Comments

[sneakatack]

I think feel voice comes out clearer during the rewrites.

[goddessofilm]

I love your voice. You have one. You just aren't sure that it's really you yet and you get squeamish and scared of exploring it because it seems weird and your CONTERACT with mimickry.

Your voice it there. It is good. No, great. Why else would your closest friends constantly hang around you after seeing you as an angry, angry drunk? ;) You're brilliant, you just need to keep exploring and get comfortable getting the you out of the writers you love who have been an influence.

Good music selection, too, by the by.