the things that you see

Nov 23, 2013 23:09

the things that you see
krisho(hp!au) - pg 13
junmyeon is bad at getting the prefects to listen, but somehow he gets yifan to notice him

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pairing: kris/suho, kris, exo, suho

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lolly1588 November 23 2013, 18:13:50 UTC
aw this is really sweet,and nice
can we have a sequel where they fall in love

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lizzyu November 23 2013, 18:47:33 UTC
i'll see what i can do. i took out a couple of scenes that were supposed to happen, but no promises!
thank you for reading!

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hipployta November 23 2013, 18:33:15 UTC
Cute...and an enjoyable slice of life story from Yifan's POV... I wonder how it is from Joonmyeon's since Yifan is kind of hot/cold

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lizzyu November 23 2013, 18:48:51 UTC
in my head canon, junmyeon is somewhat confused.
but he realizes that yifan expresses himself in a weird way even if he cares, and they live happily ever after

thank you for reading!

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stars_in_love November 24 2013, 01:00:05 UTC
oh god please make a sequel to this ;u; i rarely ever see hp!au and even rarer then krisho hp!au ;u; ;U; i am so happ y hsfkdjghdkfgjh

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lizzyu November 25 2013, 08:09:55 UTC
eep. thank you for reading!
i've some other planned scenes that weren't written, but there are no promises though (:

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1beinghated November 24 2013, 04:31:52 UTC
*cries* lemme get this out of the way but TAO MONOPOLIZING JUNMYEON'S ATTENTION THAT IS TAO YOU GOT IT AUTHOR-NIM I LIKE HOW YOU WRITE TAO PERFECT TAOOOO

but AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW SHIT that was so cute ^^ kris in denial is kris in rl HAHA jk but really, this is so cute. I love how completely gentle junmyeon is, almost motherly, y'know? and you wrote kris so well ;A; this whole fic is just aaahhhh so cute~

the difference between the way Kris and Junmyeon would lead (or be Head Boy) is wonderful, since they're rather different but also compliment each other :)

also, as a side note, LUHAN YOU HELPFUL LITTLE SHIT

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lizzyu November 25 2013, 08:13:11 UTC
i love luhan the most in this fic tbh. he's the helpful and nosy friend that everyone will want to have.
& yes, tao is so damn clingy even irl (:
junmyeon's character is basically built upon how he deal with the exo kids on a daily basis. he just babies all of them too much(esp tao)

and thank you for reading!

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luhans November 24 2013, 10:22:45 UTC
Oh first of all let me tell you how I love you so much for this hp!au krisho ;___;
I really really love hp and krisho and akjdhalskjd you make my dream comes true.
I wish you could write more about their romantic adventures late night during prefect duties *_*

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lizzyu November 25 2013, 08:18:28 UTC
thank you! i'm so incredibly flattered since i'm a secret fan of all the krisho that you write.
i've a few scenes that i've planned, but there are no promises that i'll churn it out though (:
& thank you for reading! (:

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