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[ljvscmr]

American Football Spectacular: Race To The Bottom

Yatta! Our Raiders got that first win over the pathetic Arizona American football Cardinals! Thank goodness. Well, phew, that means no more "winless season" jabs

Comments

[mercurialcirce]

Hey, Chris: shouldn't the word choice be "neither" in the sentence, "Yeah, me either," up above in the entry for the Oakland Raiders? "Yeah, me neither." vs "Yeah, me either."

And for the Detroit Lions, I'd swap out the two dashes between "Let's review" and "Another..." and replace with a colon, so that it reads "Let's review: another new head coach...."

Cardinals? *cough* spell check doesn't always work. Tough? I think you meant "though." Which, in itself, is a word that just plain looks wrong everywhere.

Um... just some unsolicited editing.... *slinks away*

[ljvscmr]

I made a lot of mistakes in that column. I slapped it together in exactly 45 minutes at my temp job to keep from angering my overly straightlaced boss. The typos and bad wording are embarrasing, but I'm glad that people/you caught 'em.

Blah.

No, I'm glad for your help. I expect everything I write to be perfect everytime, so when I have to rush... it is galling to see my typos writ large, but there it is. I'm gonna correct that stuff on the SFist website in a bit...

thank you