Fic: The Cursed Sword - Chapter 7

[lksugui]

Here you go, chapter 7!

Title: The Cursed Sword
Genre: Adventure
Summary: the battle begins...
Word count: 1301
Fandom: Get Backers/X-Men
Pairing: Ban/Ginji
Rating: PG-13 or T
Warnings: violence, blood, cursing, mild shonen ai.
Disclaimer: Get Backers and all its characters belong to Yuya Aoki and Randou Ayamine. Wolverine belongs to Marvel Comics.

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Comments

[aquarius_galuxy]

Hey, where'd Logan go? =O I liked how Ban and Ginji took both Weed and Iron out, but somehow the fight seemed to be over too quick. o_o Maybe you could have Ban tracing the chi, and possibly sensing the person's actions, as well as Ban trying to move more, or trying to block blows. =D Since it's in Ban's POV.

OCs are kind of hard to develop well, really. But I haven't succeeded with creating good ones myself, so it's hard to say anything much on that. =s I suppose revealing a little of them at a time helps, and try not to make them perfect. =P Have sides to them, and different thoughts/emotions.

[lksugui]

Ahahaha ^^; I think I should've called this "Chapter 7-A", because Logan's part comes next. It's pretty short too, though, because, really, action scenes are not my thing... I went through great pains just to write this little bit, meh... But that doesn't mean I'm gonna give up, of course! :D There will be more battles in the future and hopefully, I will be able to write better by then.

About the way the trio was defeated so fast, it's a little idea I had which will probably be explained around chapter 9 or 10... Nothing original or mindblowing, but I hope it will at least make sense, hehe.

Thank you so much for commenting, your words are always encouraging and really helpful! *hugs*

[aquarius_galuxy]

=P Action scenes aren't my thing either. But there're some people who're really great with them, so you might like to see how they do it. =D

Good luck with writing, and you're welcome! ^^ *hugs back*