Hmm... It was kind of strange to see Logan fainting pretty quickly, but other than that, I'm fine with the chapter! =D I like the way it ended, it definitely has me wanting to know more about Purity. =D
Erm, Logan fell so quick because the mist had been attacking his lungs since the beginning of the fight... but yeah, I think I failed to make this detail clear enough ^^;
Hehe, we'll know a little more about Purity-chan in the next chapter... I kinda left this a little aside this past week because I wanted to write a short fic for Valentine's Day but will return as soon as I finish that! ^^
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Erm, Logan fell so quick because the mist had been attacking his lungs since the beginning of the fight... but yeah, I think I failed to make this detail clear enough ^^;
Hehe, we'll know a little more about Purity-chan in the next chapter... I kinda left this a little aside this past week because I wanted to write a short fic for Valentine's Day but will return as soon as I finish that! ^^
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Ooh, a V-Day fic! =D
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