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llassah

Fraser/RayK fic

Oct 18, 2009 00:05

This has been sitting in my WIPs folder for ages, but I've polished it up. The song Ray dances to is 'Sophisticated Lady' by Duke Ellington.

Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: PG-13 (for language)
Length: just shy of 1000
Notes: Ray's looking for a way of saying it all without words.

( He wants a grand gesture... )

fic, due south, slash

Comments 7

j_s_cavalcante October 18 2009, 02:26:22 UTC

Ooh, this is delightful. I adore Dancing!Ray...can totally see it. Love how dancing becomes a metaphor for lovemaking, at the end. More than a metaphor, even. And the image of Fraser next to him, tap dancing. Eeeee!

\o/ Thanks for sharing this lovely piece.

lamentables October 18 2009, 10:56:59 UTC

That was beautiful. And deeply happy.

spuffyduds October 18 2009, 16:20:52 UTC

Oh, this is gorgeous! I love how Ray's feeling about vocabulary versus motion comes through again in his dismissal of the words that were written after the song and he doesn't buy them. Beautiful.

akamine_chan October 19 2009, 05:22:17 UTC

They dance until they’ve said all they need to say, then they sleep and dance in dreams.

This was so beautiful. Thank you.

luzula October 19 2009, 09:52:08 UTC

Oh, that was heart-warming. *happy sigh*