New torchwood fic for smut_bingo

[llassah]

Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/John
Rating: NC-17
Length: 2800 words
Prompts filled: penetration, fellatio, fisting, restraints, author's choice (knifeplay), frottage
Notes: In the recent torchwood episode, a reference was made to
jack and john having lived the same 2 weeks for five years together. They're trapped at the Ritz, and everything's

Comments

[spuffyduds]

I've not even seen Torchwood yet and this was still awesome.

[llassah]

ohh wow, thank you- that means a lot! *twirls*

[cyberamanda]

Very nice. Great idea. Can;t wait to read more Jack/John from you.

[llassah]

thank you so much! (and eee, it looks like john'll be around for a while, so lots more fic fodder *g*)

[kita0610]

This was absolutely fantastic. Bitter and oddly, disturbingly domestic, and hot as fuck.

There are a couple of typos- grammar/tense/words missing. I'd be happy to do a run through and point them out, because without them, this thing is damn near perfection.

Damn. I'll be rereading in any case.

[llassah]

thank you so much! the whole married comment kind of got to me- I mean, 5. years. That's a long time even for a non fucked-up couple!

I'd be grateful if you could- I've had a little look through and corrected a few things, but I kind of trotted this out quickly. Thank you so much for your kind words and the offer

[kita0610]

I think you got 'em all!

Just reread, and so glad I did. I loved this fic like cake. From now on, it's canon in my head.

As for the domesticity- hell, they even argued about who was the wife. *G*

[llassah]

yay, brilliant- thanks for the heads-up. And awwww, thank you. (john was *so* the wife *g*)

[daughteroflight]

Very good idea - I've been waiting for people to start writing about the time loop :]

[llassah]

hee! I'm hoping for lots and lots of jack/john fic for the time loop *taps foot* Thank you

[etcetera_cat]

Eeeeee!

*twirls you around*

You have made the bar fight scene approximately 452.6% more awesome by writing this!

[lamentables]

I endorse this comment.

[llassah]

thank you! *curtseys*

[llassah]

*g* yaaay! *twirls* and heey, the barfight was pretty damn awesome before that *squirms* Thank you kindly

(mop!head jack)